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How You Say It

Not long ago I got into one of those discussions that can happen when bookish friends are at the bar and have been waiting too long for a table. “What was the first book you can remember reading where you immediately wanted more?”

Like any question that leads to a great debate, one that is chock-full of ambiguity. Does it mean what book made me want more of the author’s work?…More of that series?…Or does it really try to find out what book started to turn me into a reader?

So I thought back to the books I read as a kid. I discounted the books that we usually think of as children’s books, simply because they are a different reading experience than novels or short stories. And while I know it wasn’t the first book I read, I kept coming back to one title. I remember when I finished it, I just had to tell someone how great it was. My Papa was the other sci-fi lover in the family so that’s whose ear I bent (in my mind it was five minutes, but now that I have kids I know it was probably more like a day). And I remember being beside myself when I found out there were more books in the series.

The book was The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy. 30 years (or so) later, the book still holds up to repeat reading, and stands as one of my favorites. And as I look back over a reading life that has spanned about 35 years, that book seems to be a remarkable standard-bearer for the type of books I love the most.

If I stand at my bookshelf, it’s easy to see the books I read the most. To Say Nothing of the Dog, by Connie Willis, is heavily-creased, dog-eared, faded and generally looks like it’s gone a few rounds with a hyper puppy (a fitting analogy if you’ve read the book). Red Thunder, by John Varley, though not much more than a pulp sci-fi novel, is probably the most heavily highlighted and annotated book I own. Jasper Fforde’s The Eyre Affair, has been forced on so many of my friends that I’m on my fourth copy. Lamb, by Christopher Moore… I could go on and on…

But it’s been only recently, that I realized not only how much these books are emblematic of the books I love to read the most, but they are also harbingers of the kind of writing I aspire to, even if I don’t always realize it.

What ties these books together is not just a genre–sure I love sci-fi, but there are hundreds of great sci-fi books that I’ve devoured and never picked up again. It’s also true that all of these are wildly funny (although with Red Thunder I would say that while the story is humorless, the characters bring a great wit to the events), and that’s a sure way to my heart. But if I had to pick a single thing that brings them all together it’s dialogue–I could pull back a bit and call it “Voice” just as easily, since several of these have a delightful first person narration that speaks directly to the reader.

Why? Every book I’ve ever read has dialogue. So what is it about the dialogue in these books that makes them so gripping to me?

It took me a long time to be able to answer that question. In most of these books the dialogue isn’t particularly poetic, or lovely. Nor are the characters’ words particularly insightful.

No, what makes these books such fine examples of gripping dialogue is that the author uses the dialogue not only as a means to tell the story, but also as a tool for character building. But perhaps most important of all, the characters nearly never say what you think they will.

Reading good dialogue is like watching an intricate fencing match. Each participant has their own agenda–maybe one is trying to get a straight answer, while the other is teasing with tiny revelations like a prose dance-of-the-seven-veils. In great dialogue, there is offense and defense, lunges and ripostes, jabs and parries. When dialogue is good, a section of dialogue will never wind up where you thought it would.

To me this is not only the hallmark of great writing, but also of a great storyteller. And will always get me coming back for more.

5 thoughts on “How You Say It

  1. I’ve introduced my children to The Hitchiker’s Guide to the Galaxy now and they are enjoying it just as much as I did and just as much as I do every time I read it. It is certainly one of those books that keeps me coming back again and again. Another one is the Foundation series by Isaac Asimov. Every time I read The Hitchikers’ books or the Foundation books I find something new, something else that makes me want to read them again.

    More recently, I’d add the Harry Potter books to this list as well.

    I really can’t say if it is simply the dialogue that pulls me in or if it’s the way the dialogue works to build the characters within the narration in the prose. Internal conflicts and dialogue help with that, too.


  2. I would firmly place Fritz Leiber in the short list of authors I have read over and over again. His sword and sorcery books were what I started on, but I have since found that I enjoy his (somewhat dated) science fiction much more.

    Weiss and Hickman are in there too, if only because I read so much of their Dragonlance series.


  3. I loved HHGTTG and The Eyre Affair, too. In my query pitch for my current novel, I compare my book’s style to Jasper Fforde’s. Hubris, I know, but it’s not too much of a stretch.

    Thanks for the additional titles to look up!


  4. The first book that have such an infectious quality on me was “The Catcher in the Rye”. Within a few months, I had read everything Salinger published (which wasn’t much, unfortunately). I’ve re-read “Catcher…” several times and used qualities of characters in many of his stories in my own fiction.

    I also want to apologize for being MIA lately. I’m rather consumed with a writing project. I also just discovered today that someone has yanked the web address for my blog (for some mysterious reason). I have 107 followers and only registered 12 views today.

    My father (a Cold War veteran) blames the Russians. I (being a neo-Puritan) believe it is a devilish conspiracy by godless atheists to stifle the Truth. We may both be right.

    What do you think? (Maybe there is a writing prompt in this….)


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